Now, don't let the score discourage you. If it makes you feel any better you can just check out my songs, they be horrible.
The things that puts me of isn't the song, it's the multiple songs. It feels like you're experimenting, not knowing what you actually want to make. There isn't really any hook or whatever in it. Every time I'm about to get into the groove, something drastically change and keeps on morphing.
In all honestly I'm sure you know what i mean, otherwise you wouldn't be looking for critism, am I right?
All in all, you're on the right track my friend. Thanks for sharing mate! I love all you creators out there. I wish i had the tenacity to keep doing what you do.
Thanks bro. Honesty is exactly what i want. I have been experimenting quite a bit. I feeling out where in the Electronic genre i fit. The thing is tho each song is me and my style. I got big plans and everyone's advice helps out alot. DnB is where my heart lies and there are going to many more like this track but I plan on using everyone's advice to better my craft of forging music in my blender. I appreciate your advice and it will help me alot on my next track. I going to revamp this track as well as starting a new track. Much love, and be sure to keep an Eye open for more songs soon to come.
+DJ Tech Elric+
Amazing piece mate! I'm humbled by how many talented people reside here on Newgrounds. I just think it's a shame you guys don't get the exposure you deserve.
Wonderful creation friend! You must be proud.
Oh, and thank you for sharing! Much appreciated!
I <3 u
What more can i say? I just love this, plain and simple.
It makes me feel like such a suckage knowing how i cant manage making even a basic tune in FL studio (check my profile.. Even the beat's off -_-) and you made this just like that. : <
I do envy you :P
Im just saying, its awesome!
No complaints, just praises. ^^
When i write a review I tend to take a peak on what other people say and uhh.. Im not sure i follow this tech-talk-stuff really..
To me this is a fucking sweet tune, and everything fits in just so perectly. No annoying base whoring, the tune fits perfectly, thus no headache as i get from most music here on NG.
I am indeed bored as hell so i thought i'd write you something encouraging. xD
Anyho, the song just ended (yeah i take that long to write a couple of lines) and im of to new adventures!
IdentiC away! *swoooch*
This be going on ma mp3 mon. *^___^*
Man you should'nt give up on this song! :O
Fucking awesome name and the chords n stuff's is just made of awesome. My main complaint with this is that you have nothing in the background. Now i have 0 know how about how to make music so bare with me, i dont have the proper names for it. :P
I just wish there were something in the background wich lifts the song up, sorta like a tasty mishmash filling wich makes that special cake just perfect. Without it, the cake is dry, it still tastes the same, but the quality becomes lacking. :P
Atm your cake is sorta dry. Delicious, but dry. :P
Hell im not sure that even made any sense to you xD
Gj dude, ace tune! *^___^*
Haha thanks for the feedback! I'll see if I can work on this a bit more in the future. Just been pretty busy lately :P
Wad do ya kno..
Seems i got a new fav artist! Good stuff's d00d!
Faved n' fived!
Spikestars is right ya kno? You have no say in this.. This song has to be finnished! Your talking crasy talks about not finnishing this, because.. Because.. Its one of the better songs ive heard in a good while. :P
In short.. Couldnt be better man, just finnish it damn you!
The style of this is so much alike Dj Mango, and that is to me a good thing.
Looked so empy here i had to drop a review.. Keep up the good work dude. :)
Thank you, i appreciate it :D
"Probably when I find the secret to making this song freakin rule."
I often imagine a song like a highway, wich is wide as hell. This song is like a really really wide highway, with a steady flow right? Yeah so you enter the driving lane and start cruisin, more and more traffic comes up, but it flows smoothly, but after a long while there is still no real base to drive it forward, so its getting dull, and your about to dream away behind the wheel and BAM high pitch melody that doesnt fit the rest of the tunes slams your eardrums and your wide awake., and wonder wth just happend.
Do yourself a favour and remove the melody that comes in at 1:37 and use it in a song of its own instead. Sure it fits pretty well at 2:20ish, but by then the whole song is something else, and the whole beginning is rendered obselete, cause you cant even remember it.
So basically, decide what tune you want it to revolve around and stick with it, else it becomes to much and you'll just get a bunch of tunes mashed up with added base..
Anyway its good for what it is, and i love some of your other work dude. ^^
Thanks for uploading <3
Im speechless.. Totally knackered and really should go to bed, but im finding it hard to shut down the browser. Havent heard anything this soothing for a long time. Im not sure if i should thank you or praise you.
Take care of that voice of yours. Its pure gold!
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