IdentiC's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[On The Palisade ep3]

Holy crap batman!

Absolutely loved it! The animation, voice acting and the script is as tight as a fat chicks pants made of latex!

Ahem..

I enjoyed myself immensily, it jsut sucked me straight in. At first i did worry a tad about the bright palet, and the lack of shadows, but oh boy was i wrong! This reminds me of those late night animation shows you see popping up on TV from time to time. Short sweet, and full of punchlines.

Sadly though im with ADHD here, and he wont let me remember any, so im not actually sure that.. Oh god.. What was i doing again?

OH! Shiny!

Jonimator responds:

Best simile I've heard today!!

[Queens Bite]

awsum!

Man this flash was just top notch! Im really impressed by the style of it, and how smooth the animation was.

I also feel that it wasnt to short, nor do i feel you need to explain what it was about. I noticed how you cleverly placed hints in the backgrounds (picture of the king / lord with his fav plant) and the poor buttler who was to feed it. The wig gave away its sofisticated nature, and the failure was just to obvious.

For what this is it couldnt be better, and that is how i will judge it.

Nice one mate. :)

The-Evil-Bunny responds:

You bring tears to my eyes with your kind words :'). Or at least almost ;) Thanks a lot for the kind words.
Greetings from the chocolat land!

[LARRY episode 1.5]

Awsum!

Very nice job indeed! The flash went alot smother then the first one did, so great job doodle! I do however have a "complaint" wich is more of a question so id love a answer from someone sitting on another computer. :P

Is the sound of, or is it my optical cable messing it up.. Im never really sure : /

Anyho, make this a hour long and i would buy the dvd.

Its gold i tells ya *^_^*

Jazza responds:

thanks man.

[FF7 -- I Like it Here]

Pokemon!

Yeah.. Thats the thing in here i remember the most. It was a stroke of genious my friend! What better way of getting your cherrished pets around, then with pokeballs eh?

The flash was entertaining, and i loved the jokes and story line. I wish i had dreams like this.

It would make me a better person.

Short people are dumb.

Its true..

...

Im sleepy (>^_^)>

bearses responds:

._.

[hugs are good]

Lawls n such

For some reason this made me think of all thiems teenager horror movies, where people die in the most retarded of ways.

For some reason though i feel a monocle would be in place.

And cake..

Anyho, omg crappy animation, but really sweet voice acting, and being what it is i feel its worth a 7, being entertaining n such.

**smooch**

Sethdd responds:

=O yay I got a kiss! so awesome! thanks for the review! and I agree there definitely should be some cake!

[The Creep]

Enjoyable.

Well then. The time is 7:27 in the morning and im just heading out for school, and i decided to watch this little cartoon. Judging by the thumbnail i kinda realised what the quality would be like. I was pleasantly surprised. Im not sure if it is the mood im currently in, but the better part of the flash sorta just flowed with me, and i can still here the funky song in my head. The "storyline" was great for what it was, and almost hypnotic in its way of being told. I do however feel you could have worked a little more on the art. Added shadings, little more detail etc etc, because peronally, im growing tired of everyone riding the crappy flash wave that Egoraptor created. Lastly i hated the ending. It just spoiled the good mood the flash had set up for me, and i just felt dissapointed, plus i wanted to see what a safe city looks like. You built up suspense, and then you ruined it with a random trippy colour thingy. Shame on you id say.

All in all a good flash, much better then alot of things i see here on newgrounds, but also alot worse.

Thanks for uploading!

[Dream Adventure!]

Yays

Basically the 8 star is because im not completely sure how to rate this.

I liked this flash, alot! When i started watching it i was wondering where you were going with this, the suddenly it started to spazz out, and the messages kept popping up and i dunno. I could relate to my own gaming, and big chunks of holes in my life, and how you can never win. It always ends with game over.

Dont know what else to say other than, thanks for sharing!

Emptygoddess responds:

You're welcome.

[BlownOutOfProportion4 (1)]

Well

I usually read authors comment before i watch a flash, so i understand your motives behind this, and i shall offer you some critisism cause you asked for it so nicely.

First off, as you already stated, sound and animation is not that great, and i understand why you dont want to focus to much on that, you wanna be a comedy writer, but here in lies the problem. The pasing, voice acting, and animation took out the edge from alot of the jokes. It became sluggish, and at times well, kinda boring. I found it hard to keep my focus up long enough to catch the jokes hidden inbetween the fillers and stuff.

And sure i think dick jokes and the likes are fun stuff, but when everything starts revolving around it (spewing, tits, dicks and gay jokes) it starts to get a bit old.

Have you thought about trying to find a animator along with some voice actors to write for? You said you wanted to be a writer, and whats better practise then trying to work with some people over the net? Not only do you gain the experience at working as a team, you also gain feedback, and a hopefully higher quality overall.

All in all i found it a decent flash, but the sloppy animation and sound sorta took lots of the edge of for me.

And for the record, one of the points of being in comedy buisness is trying to be either original, or surprise people. ThreeD did offer you some serious critism only in a very sloppy way. You want to improve, then dont flip of your audience, even if their views on things are in direct contrast to yours.

Thanks.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

LOL, ThreeD was actually the only one I flipped off on cause it was getting annoying, im usually very laid back and accepting of the nasty comments, i am the creator of junkyard animations so im used to the criticism :P

but yeah, u do raise some good points... i just dont think id be able to find an animator whod want to animate a 30 minute flash for me lol, id be better off pitching a script to t.v. after considering it and revising it over and over, this episode was just a test to get some good feedback... thanks for yours bro! :)