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Holy crap batman!

Absolutely loved it! The animation, voice acting and the script is as tight as a fat chicks pants made of latex!

Ahem..

I enjoyed myself immensily, it jsut sucked me straight in. At first i did worry a tad about the bright palet, and the lack of shadows, but oh boy was i wrong! This reminds me of those late night animation shows you see popping up on TV from time to time. Short sweet, and full of punchlines.

Sadly though im with ADHD here, and he wont let me remember any, so im not actually sure that.. Oh god.. What was i doing again?

OH! Shiny!

Jonimator responds:

Best simile I've heard today!!

Oh fathers.. Will they ever learn. *snickers*

Man this was just about what happend when i sat down in a car for the first time, only i didnt smash a house, i parked the car on the sidewalk, inches from a tree. Fucked up the wheels all goodie like. ^^

ANYWAY, you got a really cool thing going here. If i have understood what your saying correct, your parodising things that happens to you in real life, wich is a stroke of genious. One thing you often encounter while setting up a joke is that you dont have a clue on what led up to the punchline. Sure you got the overall story down, but you lack the emotional connection to the whole thing, wich often makes the story suck when retold.

This however is connected to real situations, and i think alot of people can relate to the situation of driving a big metal monster.

What took away stars from this was the art style. It made me quite sad to see you didnt put more effort into it. I dont remember any shading, it was just sorta bland and simple. Wich is okay, but i still feel it need to be said.

Overall a funny flash, decent rewatch value, and decent art.

As a thanks for making this flash, i thought id attempt a decent review being the lazy ass i am.

Thanks alot man, i was entertained. :)

Diives responds:

Wow man, this review is the best that I read for me :O!

Dude, I understand you! this animation is real! haahajaha this happened when I have 17 years old and after that a trauma for driving attack me :'(
Well.. Now I know driving luckily :D!

yeah men.. this animation took me 4 days of drawing and 2 days the sounds and variety.. so, I didn't put so much effor.. I understand you.. for the another animations I will put more love in the art believe me :)

I think this animation liked you so much because you're identified with this? hahaha anyway I'm really glad that you like it :D
Thanks so much to you for your rewrite! :D

awsum!

Man this flash was just top notch! Im really impressed by the style of it, and how smooth the animation was.

I also feel that it wasnt to short, nor do i feel you need to explain what it was about. I noticed how you cleverly placed hints in the backgrounds (picture of the king / lord with his fav plant) and the poor buttler who was to feed it. The wig gave away its sofisticated nature, and the failure was just to obvious.

For what this is it couldnt be better, and that is how i will judge it.

Nice one mate. :)

The-Evil-Bunny responds:

You bring tears to my eyes with your kind words :'). Or at least almost ;) Thanks a lot for the kind words.
Greetings from the chocolat land!

Awsum!

Very nice job indeed! The flash went alot smother then the first one did, so great job doodle! I do however have a "complaint" wich is more of a question so id love a answer from someone sitting on another computer. :P

Is the sound of, or is it my optical cable messing it up.. Im never really sure : /

Anyho, make this a hour long and i would buy the dvd.

Its gold i tells ya *^_^*

Jazza responds:

thanks man.

Pokemon!

Yeah.. Thats the thing in here i remember the most. It was a stroke of genious my friend! What better way of getting your cherrished pets around, then with pokeballs eh?

The flash was entertaining, and i loved the jokes and story line. I wish i had dreams like this.

It would make me a better person.

Short people are dumb.

Its true..

...

Im sleepy (>^_^)>

bearses responds:

._.

Lawls n such

For some reason this made me think of all thiems teenager horror movies, where people die in the most retarded of ways.

For some reason though i feel a monocle would be in place.

And cake..

Anyho, omg crappy animation, but really sweet voice acting, and being what it is i feel its worth a 7, being entertaining n such.

**smooch**

Sethdd responds:

=O yay I got a kiss! so awesome! thanks for the review! and I agree there definitely should be some cake!

Enjoyable.

Well then. The time is 7:27 in the morning and im just heading out for school, and i decided to watch this little cartoon. Judging by the thumbnail i kinda realised what the quality would be like. I was pleasantly surprised. Im not sure if it is the mood im currently in, but the better part of the flash sorta just flowed with me, and i can still here the funky song in my head. The "storyline" was great for what it was, and almost hypnotic in its way of being told. I do however feel you could have worked a little more on the art. Added shadings, little more detail etc etc, because peronally, im growing tired of everyone riding the crappy flash wave that Egoraptor created. Lastly i hated the ending. It just spoiled the good mood the flash had set up for me, and i just felt dissapointed, plus i wanted to see what a safe city looks like. You built up suspense, and then you ruined it with a random trippy colour thingy. Shame on you id say.

All in all a good flash, much better then alot of things i see here on newgrounds, but also alot worse.

Thanks for uploading!

Yays

Basically the 8 star is because im not completely sure how to rate this.

I liked this flash, alot! When i started watching it i was wondering where you were going with this, the suddenly it started to spazz out, and the messages kept popping up and i dunno. I could relate to my own gaming, and big chunks of holes in my life, and how you can never win. It always ends with game over.

Dont know what else to say other than, thanks for sharing!

Emptygoddess responds:

You're welcome.

Well

I usually read authors comment before i watch a flash, so i understand your motives behind this, and i shall offer you some critisism cause you asked for it so nicely.

First off, as you already stated, sound and animation is not that great, and i understand why you dont want to focus to much on that, you wanna be a comedy writer, but here in lies the problem. The pasing, voice acting, and animation took out the edge from alot of the jokes. It became sluggish, and at times well, kinda boring. I found it hard to keep my focus up long enough to catch the jokes hidden inbetween the fillers and stuff.

And sure i think dick jokes and the likes are fun stuff, but when everything starts revolving around it (spewing, tits, dicks and gay jokes) it starts to get a bit old.

Have you thought about trying to find a animator along with some voice actors to write for? You said you wanted to be a writer, and whats better practise then trying to work with some people over the net? Not only do you gain the experience at working as a team, you also gain feedback, and a hopefully higher quality overall.

All in all i found it a decent flash, but the sloppy animation and sound sorta took lots of the edge of for me.

And for the record, one of the points of being in comedy buisness is trying to be either original, or surprise people. ThreeD did offer you some serious critism only in a very sloppy way. You want to improve, then dont flip of your audience, even if their views on things are in direct contrast to yours.

Thanks.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

LOL, ThreeD was actually the only one I flipped off on cause it was getting annoying, im usually very laid back and accepting of the nasty comments, i am the creator of junkyard animations so im used to the criticism :P

but yeah, u do raise some good points... i just dont think id be able to find an animator whod want to animate a 30 minute flash for me lol, id be better off pitching a script to t.v. after considering it and revising it over and over, this episode was just a test to get some good feedback... thanks for yours bro! :)

wewt!

Really fluid! Did i mention how fluid it was? Seriously, im a sucker for stick animations such as this one. You have a quite original style, wich i have seen around some, but far from enough times. Kinda numb expressions, and very simple lines, but with a very fluid animation. I think its funny i havent seen you around before (if i have i have prolly forgot it) because this stuff is gold.

Have you ever thought about making a game about this? Im thinking kinda like Fansy pants idea, but with the adition of using a knife / sword to slice up Tentacles. Something i would find cool (stay with me) jump around on the head of a BIG tentacle thing, and dodge the arms, and slice in various points to finally bring it down. :P

Oh my this became a wall of text..

Anyway, awesome work on this one! Faved and fived! :)

SWiTCH responds:

Thanks for the kind words!

Yeah I have thought about that actually. It would be fun to flip knives at those squishy little guys. I've got other stuff in the works first though. :)

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