Hum.. tough one..
Okay i give this a 1, but please, dontlet that get you down.. I like the attempt cause, most people just make a crappy blood n´ goore attempt.. You actually tried to put some humour in this so ill give you that much.
About the flash; I didnt like it.. at all. it was stiff, and no real animation in it, and sound was a bit.. well, bad. Be as it may, try to make not shorter, but some more action. Ive taken note to the fact that people generally like movies with things happening all the time.
Tell you what, try making a music vid with sprite animation were they dance or whatever. And dont use the boxes around the sprites. Imo music vids is one of the better ways to practise animation cause you can practise moves etc, and if you pick nice music it will deffinently up the score (and you get better quality sound ;))
Nice try mate, but try to work some more on the animation..
(good stuff, front page.. that should annoy thiem elitists xD)
Fireysnake: Shut the hell up.. Maybe someone wanted to give this guy a chanse? Atleast this guy tried to make a funny flash instead of the general shit that flows thrue.. have you checked out "heil´s" animations? Aparently he is a popular artist..