never dreamt like that..
Ive never dreamt anything like that.. most of my dreams are often very short, and very.. Real. Real as in waking up in cramps etc. it has happend on two occasions ive awaken in cramps from not beeing able to breath, choking in my own saliva, lungs hurting, and all that shizzle.. long time ago now though so..
So to the boring stuff; Nicely drawn flash, and very symbolic. I cant say there could be any improvements cause as you have stated, its more the dream then the flash. Ill give you a 10/10 and a 5/5 cause its rare i stumble upon flash films with a symbolic and philosophical meaning.
Cheers!